Recorded with the Audio Technica AT-2020.
Here are two points I can improve on, after listening to myself:
- Wrong will be right, when Aslan comes in sight - I think I emphasized too many words in the same sentence: the "right" word and "Aslan" word. I should only keep one in. In my opinion, it should be only the word "right" that should be emphasized. If I overdo the emphasis, it becomes too distracting to understand where the important parts are to pay attention.
- We shall have spring again - I think I went to rough on the emphasis on the word "spring". Most people imagine spring as a happy time, right before Summer. The way I said it, I made it feel more like Fall or Winter.