7-11 Vo Practice

Here's another VO practice using the "7-11" script. Now I know you've heard the script in the past, but I decided to do this one again (I'm trying to keep each post with a different script) since I like it so much. 

Although I was kinda sloppy in this one, so it's not to good (I think I'll try drinking more water before I start so that I can clear mouth, and do the bottle cap exercise so my mouth is more energetic).

For this script, I'm not sure if I should sound tired, or hungry, or both together. What do you think?

Well, that's all. Bye!